When it’s a dark and cold night and you’re walking home alone, it isn’t hard to get lost down a creepy street full of houses that give off a haunted vibe. I tried to contain myself walking past number 29, but I just couldn’t. It had no gate which made me suspicious about what was inside. I took one step into the driveway and SLAM! A large brown and rusty gate had appeared.
I decided that I would slowly creep through and check the inside. That was a massive mistake though. Once again the door shut and locked me in. What could I do?
– Sophie
Sophie,
I really enjoyed how your gate reapeared as she stood on the driveway. It really made me wonder what was next. I also really like your choice of vocabulary and the tier 3 word use.
Keep it up
-Natalie
Thank you for encouraging me Nat. I’m sure you put just as much effort into you work
I loved this writing piece Sophie. I really liked how you left it off with a question for us to think about. There were so many different ideas in this that really wanted me to know the story behind it. Good Job
Marissa Z
Thank you for the feedback Marissa. I really thought about. If your writing was shown to me I’m sure you had as great of a piece.
Aaaahhhhh.
I would not like to be you at this moment. I fell bad you having to decide the fate of this kid.
HAHAHA! Your writing probably with this stimulus probably had a creepy part in it too.