Week #48 5B

A defrosting polar bear was eager to find his destiny. As he sought paradise he found he was 1 on 1 with the megalodon. The most dangerous creature alive. Giant waves swallowed the poor polar bear. I clarified that the megalodon wasn’t creating the vicious waves. Something else was. As I peered through the x-ray vision scope, a planet sized monster erupted from thin air. Giant razor teeth dug into the megalodons gills causing blood to leak. I couldn’t believe my eyes as they expanded wide open. The polar bear was the next victim of this unknown creature. Will he die?

– Douglas 

2 thoughts on “Week #48 5B”

  1. Your writing was very intriguing, Douglas.
    You’ve included lots of imagery in your writing which allowed me to visualise what you were saying. I also liked your incorporation of megladons. Very creative.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms Nelson

  2. Kia ora Douglas. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. You have used words imaginatively and creatively. These word choices add detail that make your work really interesting to read. Keep rising to the 100 WC Douglas!

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