Week #48 5G

The polar bears got into position… the games had started. The ice had already started to melt. Bobby was out as he had chosen an unlucky spot. The island was big but already a quarter of the island was taken out. Eight polar bears were still on the platform. Oh and a push by Gary, and then there were 3. Gary, Bob and Jeff were the last standing. Who would make it? As the last pieces of ice melted, they had all fallen at the same time. Who had won? Let’s check the replay. Ohhhh Bob was still in the air by a hair. Bob wins an unlimited amount of fish.

– Sebastian

3 thoughts on “Week #48 5G”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Sebastian. I love the idea of polars having games on the ice, and that the prize was unlimited fish! Your commentary was well paced, with the questions adding drama to the text. I enjoyed reading your writing. 🙏

  2. Kia ora Sebastian.’
    I think that you have created a classic tale here as it is so well told. The style of writing is fantastic and I love that you have injected some humour into what could potentially be a more desperate or sad story. Keep up the great writing, and if you get a chance, come and visit our blog at: https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
    Ms M #100WC

  3. Hi Sebastian
    I love this 100 word challenge as it’s such a different take on the prompt. The polar bears playing games is very creative and in your 100 word challenge you use a good mix of questions and general commentary to create the atmosphere and tension of the games. An unlimited amount of fish sounds like the perfect prize for a polar bear. Well done.
    Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland

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